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We are a year 5/6 (9-10 year olds) class from Bairds Mainfreight Primary School in Auckland, NZ.

You can see some of our learning that took place in Room 12 in 2010 and 2011.

NB: I have moved to a new school now so this blog is no longer active. You are still welcome to comment and look at the great fun we had over the past two years.

Thank you for all the lovely comments :)
Tara T-J
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Sunday, May 15, 2011

Introduction
I can prove that Mr Onceller should be aloud to cut the trees down because he can give the barbaloots space,donate money to the hungry barabaloots and NO-ONE CAN STOP HIM


Should Mr Onceller be aloud to cut the trees down?
Well,Firstly I can prove he should cut the trees down because he can give the barbaloots space,for example,if he wasn't aloud to cut the trees down,the poor barbaloots would bump into nearly every tree and be hurt.

Secondly I believe that the Onceller should be aloud to cut the trees down because he can make heaps of money for his family and if he has some money left,he can donate the money to the hungry barbaloots.For example if he was not aloud to cut the trees down,his poor family and the poor barbaloots would have to look for their own food.


Finally i strongly believe that Mr Onceller should be aloud to cut the trees down because NO-ONE CAN STOP HIM



Conclusion
Therefore I have proved that Mr Onceller SHOULD CUT THE TREES TO MAKE THNEEDS

By Zanitha

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